Response to Caroline Price’s This I Believe Essay

First off Caroline, good job on your This I Believe essay. I know your grandfather must have been a very strong and determined man. He is an inspiration to us all! I think that we can all draw a good lesson out of this story. I’m so sorry for your loss but I’m glad that you will always have something to admire him for. You essay is both well structured and easy flowing. The way you ended your essay with a lesson made the essay even more powerful. Good job Caroline!